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Question:

Peter Pan is the story of a boy who doesn't want to grow up. If you could pick any age to be forever, which age would it be? You can pick an age you have not yet been. Why would you pick that age? Be sure to use examples and details when writing your essay explaining which age you would choose to be and why.

There is one thing that every creature in this world is doing together: getting older. The influence of time can’t be taken away by anything known so far. However, humans have been trying to find the execs to challenge their doomed fate of continuously aging for the effect it brings upon us. It makes us weak and leaves us its dreadful mark. That is the reason why human wants stay young.
As for me, I don’t want to be weak and ugly either. If I could pick any age to be forever, I would pick 20. At the age of 20, it is generally accepted that you are a grown-up, an adult, capable of doing anything that the law allows you to do. For instance, owning a car or a house, drink or get married. Still, people consider 20 a young age. Therefore, if I were able to stay 20, I would be both young and independent. I would be in good physical condition since my evolvement is nearly complete. In my opinion, being 20 years old is being great status.
However, staying young is not just about your body, it is also about your mind. Some might see the difference between the mind of an elderly person and have a young person. The most precious thing in the mind of a young is the passion within. With the passion, youngsters have the ability to do things with great enthusiasm and try to achieve their goal with all the energy they have. Furthermore, they have the ability to love. Old people on the other hand, have lost their earlier way of thinking because of the influence of time. For instance, one may become pessimistic while he used to be optimistic when he was young.
Being young is both physical and mental. It is one of our deepest desires. I hope that I will be able to achieve it someday. When that day comes, my path to immortality will be closer than ever.